Audible
December 12th 2006 14:04
:
...POETRY...
Hey Folks, here's another poem. Oh and I'm hanging for the next Ashes Test...
Audible
Every now and then
branches move to thewind
every now and then
petals
f
a
l
l
and I watch
from their release point
to
gravity's
end
each one
challenges authenticity
of the definition of sound
Audible
Every now and then
branches move to thewind
every now and then
petals
f
a
l
l
and I watch
from their release point
to
gravity's
end
each one
challenges authenticity
of the definition of sound
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Comment by theadora
at the boardroom
Ad Magnum Opus
Comment by Lily
Ars Poetica
i admire your brevity and abiity to capture....
i've had the same problem with form not sticking... so i tried this;
....f
...a
.....l
.......l
......i
....n
.....g
not quite the same, but ....
~Lily
Comment by theadora
at the boardroom
Ad Magnum Opus
Agree not quite the same thing, but you certainly understood where i was going with the shape. i played around with spacing between words or lack thereof.
Again thank you
Theadora